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In the absence of hope,
I care.

When someone is down,
I care.

When there is no hope
of someone listening,
I care.

I care
to show there is always
someone there for a person.

I care
when no one
else does.

I care for family.
I care for friends.
I care for you.

When I care — it shows.

I am there to guide someone into hope.

I will always care
even in rough times.

Words from the Author – Haley Wilson

Caring is something that goes further than words. Caring is an action shown towards others. When no one cares you can be the person to care. When you care it gives someone hope. Be the one to stand forward and care for someone.

Revision Decision

I decided to look over my piece to see what was missing. I added repetition for effect and specific groups of people I thought were important. I chose to lead with advice in the first three stanzas and then show how I offer support for others.